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Compare These 3 Little Things to Improve Your Writing

Become critical of the little things, not the big things.

Benjamin Watkins
2 min readFeb 5, 2023
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Comparison is the thief of joy.

At least, the wrong writing comparisons are the thief of joy. They can destroy your identity as a writer. They can cause you to hate your career as a writer.

But there are good comparisons as a writer. I’ve learned this over the past few years. Good comparisons strengthen you as a writer.

To improve your writing, compare these 3 little things.

1. Word choice

Word choices are a difference maker in your writing.

Choosing what word to describe something can be agonizing. When you find the right word, it gives your writing extra clarity.

If you want to see how you’ve grown as a writer, look at the vocabulary of your writing. Look at your word choice. See how you’ve made incremental improvements as a writer over the years.

2. Compare your sentences

Sentences are music notes.

When it’s in tune, the music sounds melodious. But if something is out of tune, the music sounds awful. Your sentences create music.

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Benjamin Watkins
Benjamin Watkins

Written by Benjamin Watkins

Founder of ThisIsCopy.com | Health Tech Copywriter | Copywriting examples at https://laviebenrose.substack.com/. Dad of five adventurous kids..

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